pbd spec v1r1 - Fred's revisions

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Fred Carter <>
Date
2014-06-16T20:32:25+00:00
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pbd spec v1r1 - Fred's revisions
Attached are some additional suggested edits to section 2 and
 4, including:

1.      
Revision to text of introduction and section 1.5 (definition of personal data)

2.      
Minor tweaks to wording of section 2 and 4

3.      
Added new Section 6: Conformance

These suggested edits will be included in the master chart.

Thx, Fred

 

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