PbD-SE WD 04 Revision 3 Section 1

Clean copy of Section 1 of the Working Document (WD) is attached for your review.
This WD includes the great
majority of edits from John, Stuart, Jonathan, Sander, Colin, Gail, and Fred. Note that any font formatting edits will be re-applied to the full document at the end.  I will upload the sections and their aggregate to Kavi tomorrow. 

The IPC is creating a compilation table of your suggested edits for your easy reference. 

 

Further requests for clarification and comments to address TC’s edits
and comments in Section 1:

Stuart: Page 5, please can you explain why we may need to clarify “
beyond user/data subject preferences”?

Jonathan: I intend to add text and an edited diagram to illustrate how
the Privacy by Design Use Case Template can be adapted for agile methodology
and user stories. So the “however” is not needed.  I have suggested to John that we can rename
it to the Privacy Use Template so that agile methodologists do not feel that the
PbD-SE spec is not applicable to them.

John: We may leave a few further details about the PMRM to Section 5
without loss to the PbD-SE introduction. I left in the PMRM reference as normative
as you correctly stated that the PbD-SE WD asserts that Privacy Use Template is
RECOMMENDED for embedding privacy requirements in a Privacy Use Case or User
Story, then the Normative designation for
PMRM is appropriate as the accessible Privacy Use Template is based on the more comprehensive PMRM methodology. 

Fred: I added goals in section 1 but also left in requirements as
software engineers interests in this document are for privacy requirements and
the documentation required by PbD. 

Sander and Colin: There are normative references to section 5 in Table
4.1. e.g. to the Privacy Use Template that provides documentation in itself.
There will be more explicit linking of software engineering documentation, or spec
asks for “equivalent” documentation across Sections 3, 4, and 5.

Thanks,

Dawn.

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Dr. Dawn Jutla, PhD
Professor of Business, Computer Science, & Technology Entrepreneurship

Community Service in Action:    Founder/Lead Designer of the MTEI Program

Research in Action: Helping Software Engineers and Industry do Privacy by Design

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