RE: [pbd-se] Groups - pbd-se-v1_0-wd06 clean copy.docx uploaded

Chairs and TC members.

 

Please find my review comments on the WD6 of the PbD-SE working draft.

 

These are substantial comments that need adequate discussion. That would require others in the TC to also have time to review these comments.

 

I have not had time to review the Annex document. Unfortunately, most of this week, I am involved in privacy policy work and unable to dedicate much time
 to review the Annex.

 

Frank/

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