> Hello again,
>
> On my final reading of the tutorial, a few typos were sighted.
Thanks. I fixed most of these except:
> - In B.1.4, <mixed>...</mixed> is ALSO captured by <interleave> <text/> p
> </interleave> as well as <mixed>...</mixed> (noting this is not critical,
> certainly not)
I didn't think this was an improvement.
> - Use of the colon. Many times the tutorial includes schema fragements in
> sentences without leading colons which is fine practice. For example, from
> section 3, the following usage is common and acceptable:
>
> "In contrast, the order of elements is significant. The pattern
>
> <element name="card">
> <element name="name">
> <text/>
> ..."
>
> There are a few spots, however, that beg for a colon or dropping the
> colon.
This is a bit too subtle for me. I tried to make my use of the colon more
consistent along the lines you suggest, but I found it a bit tricky as it
was not entirely clear to me what basis to use to determine whether to use
a colon or not. For future reference, is there some simple rule of thumb I
should apply in deciding whether to use a colon or not?
James
