First, I think that A.1 is now easy to read.
In the 8th para of A.1, we have x ::= x. I was a bit
confused. After reading the next sentence and the
production rule for innerNameClass carefully,
I understood that x in the right-hand side references
to a formal argument. But it took some time.
It would be nice if type names are shown in different
fonts.
The latest version of XQuery Foaml Semantics is:
XQuery 1.0 and XPath 2.0 Formal Semantics
16 August 2002,
Denise Draper et al.
The link for XDuce should be
http://www.kurims.kyoto-u.ac.jp/~hahosoya/papers/phdth.ps
rather than
http://xduce.sourceforge.net/papers.html
Cheers,
Makoto