#383: Yekaterina's feedback

Yekaterina:

Thanks for such a thorough reading. I addressed the bulk of your issues (the editorial changes) in a single change draft:

https://github.com/oasis-tcs/sarif-spec/blob/master/Documents/ChangeDrafts/Accepted/sarif-v2.0-issue-383-yto-editorial.docx

I merged it into the provisional draft

https://github.com/oasis-tcs/sarif-spec/blob/master/Documents/ProvisionalDrafts/sarif-v2.0-csd02-provisional.docx

and closed
the issue . My point-by-point responses are in this
issue comment .

I opened issues to track your substantive feedback:

Issue #381 : Associate descriptor metadata with thread flow locations
Issue #390 : Make certain invocation properties redactable

Thanks,
Larry