Re: [sca-assembly] Some comments on sca-assembly-1.1-spec-cd02-Rev7.doc

Vamsi,

Thanks for pointing out these items.

I've corrected the spelling mistake
in CD03.

For the document references that you
discuss, I'm happy with what's there since in all cases

there is a reference to a full description
of the document which is in section 1.2.

Perhaps of more concern is the lack
of consistency in the way those references are labelled -

some are numbers [10] and some are phrases
[SCA BPEL].  It would be good to have a single

consistent pattern and I think we decided
on words rather than numbers.  I'm happy to leave this

for now and correct it at the end of
Public Review.  It is purely editorial and I don't think there is

any likelihood of anyone referencing
the wrong document.

Yours,  Mike.

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[sca-assembly] Some comments on sca-assembly-1.1-spec-cd02-Rev7.doc

Some comments on sca-assembly-1.1-spec-cd02-Rev7.doc

Line 365: "a callback" instead of "al callback"

Should the references in the document to Normative References listed in

section 1.2 be spelled out exactly the way they are in section 1.2?  For

example, in section 1.2 we have "[SCA-Java] SCA Java Component

Implementation Specification", but in the document we are using "[SCA-Java]

Java Component Implementation Specification" (see line 201).  There
are

similar instances of references to other specs as well (see line 278).
Some

are listed below.

Line 201: the *SCA* Java Component Implementation Specification

Line 278: the *SCA* Policy Framework specification

Line 280: the *SCA* Policy Framework specification

Line 347: the *SCA* Policy Framework specification

Line 349: the *SCA* Policy Framework specification

Line 422: the *SCA* Policy Framework specification

Line 424: the *SCA* Policy Framework specification

Line 603: the *SCA* Java Component Implementation Specification

There are more such occurrences.

++Vamsi

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