Re: [sca-assembly] Review comments of sca-assembly-1.1-spec-cd02-Rev5.doc

Vamsi,

Fixed in the latest level (CD03 draft).

Yours,  Mike.

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Date:
17/02/2009 15:05

Subject:
[sca-assembly] Review comments of sca-assembly-1.1-spec-cd02-Rev5.doc

In my last set of comments, I have included some general
comments on the

usage of @ when referring to attributes, usage of "e.g." and
"i.e.". I did

not point to specific line numbers that need attention.  Here are
some

review comments on sca-assembly-1.1-spec-cd02-Rev5.doc to take care of

these:

Missing @ when referring to attributes:

Line 361: Two occurrences of "target attribute" to be replaced
with

"@target attribute"

Line 726: @requires attribute

Line 798: @requires attribute

Line 955: @value attribute

Line 1014: @source attribute

Line 1016: @source attribute

Line 1024: @file attribute

Line 1027: @source attribute

Line 1028: @file attribute

Line 1036: @type attribute

Line 1037: @element attribute

Line 1217: @targetNamespace attribute

Line 1300: @promote attribute

Line 1439: @multiplicity attribute

Line 1458: @wiredByImpl attribute

Line 1461-62: @wiredByImpl attribute

Line 1509: @uri attribute

Line 1587: @mustSupply attribute

Line 1661: @source attribute

Line 1663: @source attribute

Line 1698: @source attribute

Line 1727-28: @target attribute

Line 1884-85: Three occurrences of @autowire attribute

Line 1890: @autowire attribute

Line 2121: @targetNamespace, @name, @constrainingType, and @local

Line 2126: @autowire

Line 2128: @requires and @policySet

Line 2318: @constrainingType attribute

Line 2356: @targetNamespace attribute

Line 2370: "@constrainingType" attribute -- remove quotes(??)

Line 2379: @constrainingType attribute

Line 2501: @callbackInterface attribute

Line 2627: @callback attribute

Line 2725: @uri attribute

Line 2726: replace "URI attribute" with "@uri attribute"

Line 2731: @uri attribute

Line 2733: replace "URI attribute" with "@uri attribute"

Line 2735: @name attribute

Line 2834: "@uri" attribute -- remove quotes(??)

Line 3448: @wsdlLocation and @schemaLocation attributes

Line 3618: @location attribute

Line 3676: @location attribute

Appendix C:

[ASM60004] - @promote attribute

[ASM60011] - @multiplicity attribute

[ASM60036] - @wiredByImpl attribute - two occurrences

[ASM90001] - @uri attribute - lower case

##################

Occurrences of "eg ": 83, 342, 822, 1599, 3459, 3722, 3769, 4705,

[ASM12011],

Occurrences of "eg.": 86, 1803, 2145, 2147, 3472, 3751

Occurrences of "e.g.": 1808, 2559, 2721, 2968, 3571, 3588, 3653,
3701

Occurrences of "i.e.": 850, 1080, 1314, 1441, 1471, 2838, 2846,
2847, 3395,

3496, 3686, 3780,  [ASM50011], [ASM60005], [ASM60011], [ASM60012],

[ASM12023],

##################

Line 409: "a @type" instead of "an @type"

Line 606: "a file" instead of "an file"

Line 1027: Remove comma after "precedence".  replace "then"
with "than"

Line 2763: @URI or @uri ?

Line 2823: @URI or @uri ?

[ASM40010] - "a @type" instead of "an @type"

[ASM90003] - @URI or @uri ?

++Vamsi

Apache Tuscany Committer  http://tuscany.apache.org

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