Created CD02-rev2 by making the ed changes pointed out by SimonN as well
as reversed the way the 2119 keyword stmt bookmarks/crossrefs worked to
match that of assembly (was a major PITA to change it). I also did some
formating/ed changes and fixed a few refs/crossrefs. More detailed
comments inlined below.
CD02-rev2 (Word & PDF):
http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/sca-bindings/download.php/32884/sca-binding-ws-1.1-spec-cd02-rev2.doc
http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/sca-bindings/download.php/32885/sca-binding-ws-1.1-spec-cd02-rev2.pdf
Diff between CD02-rev1 and CD02-rev2:
http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/sca-bindings/download.php/32886/sca-binding-ws-1.1-spec-cd02-rev1-rev2-diff.pdf
Diff between CD02 and CD02-rev2:
http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/sca-bindings/download.php/32887/sca-binding-ws-1.1-spec-cd02-rev2-diff.pdf
-Anish
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Simon Nash wrote:
> Anish,
> Thanks for your work on this. Here are my comments.
>
> Major issue:
>
> All cross-references for conformance statements and tags are wrong.
>
> The bookmark R_BWSxxxxx should be the [BWSxxxxx] tag in the main
> chapter text, with a cross-reference in the "Conformance ID" column
> of Appendix B. Instead this bookmark is the main chapter text
> describing BWSxxxxx, with a cross-reference in the "Description"
> column of Appendix B.
>
> The bookmark BWSxxxxx should be the text describing BWSxxxxx in the
> "Description" column of Appendix B, with a cross-reference preceding the
> [BWSxxxxx] tag in the main chapter text. Instead this bookmark is the
> [BWSxxxxx] tag in the "Conformance ID" column of Appendix B, with a
> cross-reference following the main chapter text describing BWSxxxxx.
>
> Editorial comments:
>
> 1. In front matter "Related Work", change "supercedes" to "supersedes".
>
Done.
> 2. In front matter "Abstract", fix typo "of an SCA composites".
>
Done.
> 3. In front matter "Notices" last paragraph, fix typo "names OASIS is".
>
Done.
> 4. In section 1.1, change [[RCF2119]] to [RFC2119].
>
Done.
> 5. In section 1.4, use Word cross-reference for [SCA-Assembly].
>
Done.
> 6. In section 2 bulleted list, there are 3 cross-references to
> [SCA-Assembly] under /binding.ws/wsdlElement which should be
> Word cross-references.
>
Done.
> 7. In section 2 bulleted list, /binding.ws/wireFormat and
> /binding.ws/operationSelector should be in bold italic font.
>
Done.
> 8. In section 2 bulleted list, cross-references to [SCA-Assembly]
> in /binding.ws/wireFormat and /binding.ws/operationSelector
> should be Word cross-references.
>
Done.
> 9. In section 2.3, the Word cross-reference to [SCA-JCAA] points
> to [SCA-Policy].
>
Done.
> 10. In section 4.1, the cross-reference (R2705) should use square
> brackets instead of parentheses. Also, it should point to a
> reference in section 1.2 instead of directly to a section of
> http://www.ws-i.org/Profiles/BasicProfile-1.2.html (which is
> not one of the documents listed in section 1.2).
>
Fixed to point to the reference in section 1.2.
> 11. In section 4.2.1, conformance statement [BWS40004], fix
> typo "from the that interface".
>
Done.
> 12. In section 4.2.2, delete the colon after [BWS40005].
>
Colon is necessary (per the issue resolution).
> 13. In section 4.2.2, the paragraphs containing conformance statments
> [BWS40006] and [BWS40007] should not be indented.
>
They have to be indented. It is supposed to be a list. Fixed.
> 14. In section 4.2.2, conformance statement [BWS40007], fix
> typo "structureal".
>
Done.
> 15. In section 5.1 first paragraph, add a Word cross-reference for
> [SCA-Assembly].
>
Done.
> 16. In section 5.1 second paragraph, change [SCA-ASSEMBLY] to
> [SCA-Assembly} and add a Word cross-reference.
>
Done.
> 17. In section 5.2, change Appendix XXX to Appendix B.
>
Done.
> 18. In section 5.2, add Word cross-references for [SCA-Assembly] and
> [SCA-Policy].
>
Done.
> 19. In conformance statement BWS20005, fix double blank in
> "runtime MUST".
>
Done.
> 20. In conformance statement BWS20019, fix wrong font (Verdana
> instead of Arial) and spurious indentation in opening paragraph
> and first two bullets.
>
Not sure why this was showing up.
Encountered some strange word bug (or lack of word skills). BWS20019 now
does not have any bullets.
> 21. In conformance statement BWS20019, third bulleted item does
> not have a bullet and is wrongly indented.
>
See above.
> 22. In conformance statements BWS20021/22/23/24, fix wrong font
> (Verdana instead of Arial).
>
Fixed.
> 23. In conformance statement BWS20032, fix wrong font (Verdana
> instead of Arial) and spurious indentation.
>
Fixed.
> 24. In Appendix D, add the list of contributors.
>
SimonH: can you provide me a list. This needs to go in all the binding
specs.
> Simon
>
> Anish Karmarkar wrote:
>> Available at:
>> http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/download.php/32787/sca-binding-ws-1.1-spec-cd02-rev1.doc
>>
>> http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/download.php/32788/sca-binding-ws-1.1-spec-cd02-rev1.pdf
>>
>>
>> I used SimonH's issue 61 rev3 document as the starting point. CD02
>> rev1 includes resolutions of all the resolved issues + all the action
>> items against the ws binding editors. Appendix F contains the revision
>> history.
>>
>> The front page/footer isn't quite right (links, date, title etc) wrt
>> what we need for CD03/PRD and will be changed before publication.
>>
>> I have also attached the diff version (PDF).
>>
>> -Anish
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