Re: [sca-j] CAA Spec - WD-01 First Pass - RFC 2119 and Editorial Cleanup

Here is the final set of 78 more comments.

    Simon

Simon C. Nash, IBM Distinguished Engineer

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Simon Nash/UK/IBM@IBMGB

30/04/2008 13:08

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Re: [sca-j] CAA Spec - WD-01 First Pass
- RFC 2119 and Editorial Cleanup

Here's the next batch of 44 comments on chapter 6.

    Simon 

Simon C. Nash, IBM Distinguished Engineer

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Simon Nash/UK/IBM@IBMGB

29/04/2008 21:11

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Re: [sca-j] CAA Spec - WD-01 First Pass
- RFC 2119 and Editorial Cleanup

Here are my 24 comments on the first 5 chapters.  Apologies that this
took so long. 

   Simon 

Simon C. Nash, IBM Distinguished Engineer

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Mike Edwards/UK/IBM@IBMGB

17/04/2008 13:30

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[sca-j] CAA Spec - WD-01 First Pass
- RFC 2119 and Editorial Cleanup

Folks, 

Here is a first pass at the CAA Spec - a WD-01 containing RFC 2119 and
editorial cleanup: 

This is also posted to the TC document repository.

Yours,  Mike.

Strategist - Emerging Technologies, SCA & SDO.

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