Some comments on sca-javaci-1.1-spec-wd04_proposal.doc

Some comments on sca-javaci-1.1-spec-wd04_proposal.doc:

Line 51: ... the use of @Service *annotation* is ...

Line 91: ... In this case, @Service *annotation* can ...

Line 145: ... use of @Remotable *annotation*:

Line 154: Reword "Unless @Remotable is declared" as "Unless annotated with
@Remotable annotation"

Line 156: "annotated with a" instead of "decorated with an". The only
occurrence of decorated in the doc.

Line 203: Should we add "However, injection always occurs before the first
service method is called." like we say in the previous paragraph?

Lines 235 and 238: Should we add "However, injection always occurs before
the first service method is called."?

Line 324: APIs instead of API

Line 347: APIs instead of API


++Vamsi
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