Based on action from 6/23 conf call I am providing
feedback on this proposal.
Just a couple of minor comments:
line 46: needs trailing "/" in: " <allow roles="listOfNCNames"/>
"
line 93: same as line 46, needs trailing "/"
lines 101-102 says "... MUST satisfy the following security
management
requirements." and then the section ends. This is confusing. It
appeared
to me that the reqts were left out, but see next comments:
line 102: I suggest it should be terminated with a ":" and then apply
the next
suggestion for lines 104-127.
lines 104-127: I suggest making this a list of 4 bullets rather than
4 section numbers.
Additional comment I noticed in the main FW document, wd5,
line 391:
provides="authentication.message
exactlyOne"
should probably read:
provides="authentication.message
exactlyOnce"
Also, question on the above: wouldn't it make sense to have
"exactlyOnce" and the other reliability intents be qualifiers to
to a parent "reliability" intent? (If so, I could submit new issue,
if not, then this is just a typo fix)
Thanks,
Rich
Mike Edwards wrote:
Dave,
Yes, cranky and foaming at the
mouth......
...but I can't resist easy targets:
Line 56 has "</denyAll>
", which I believe should
read
"<denyAll/>"
Much more wickedly, I suspect that
the
maxOccurs attributes added in the schema between 202 and 235
may need revisiting, but here I
defer
to the XSD geniuses.
Yours, Mike.
Strategist - Emerging Technologies, SCA & SDO.
Co Chair OASIS SCA Assembly TC.
IBM Hursley Park, Mail Point 146, Winchester, SO21 2JN, Great Britain.
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Subject
[sca-policy] Issue
26 - security policy
schema change - updated proposal
This closes another of my AIs from the F2F, and creates more fodder for
Mike E :-) He's so cranky these days.
(See attached file: Issue26_proposal_v2.doc)
Dave Booz
STSM, SCA and WebSphere Architecture
Co-Chair OASIS SCA-Policy TC
"Distributed objects first, then world hunger"
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