John,
Thanks a lot for refining this text. I will integrate it into ed draft
07. If you are so inclined, take a peek at
http://mattm.wikispaces.org/SOA+RM+editing+assignments and see if there
is anything else you would like to contribute to.
Best Regards,
Matt
John Harby wrote:
>Hi Matt,
>
> Here is what I have for Section 1.2 of the RM. I basically just
>used what Duane provided making a couple of style/grammar corrections
>and additions. Please let me know if you need anything else at this
>time.
>
>Thanks,
>John Harby
>
