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Issue - Typographical - Franchise Model description - closed

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2011-02-28T16:43:00+00:00
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Issue - Typographical - Franchise Model description - closed
Title: New Issue -Typographical - Franchise Model description Nig: Taken on board. I propose re-wording the phrase as: "Working across and beyond government to manage…" No further action proposed Peter
From: Greenaway Nigel [mailto:] Sent: Monday, 28 February, 2011 04:25
To: TGF TC List
Subject: [tgf] New Issue -Typographical - Franchise Model description Line 754 I believe the brackets around “and beyond” should be removed. The external stakeholders in the model should be a major constituency (see line 757)and the brackets diminish their apparent importance. Regards Nig Nig Greenaway Government Division FUJITSU SERVICES Lovelace Road, Bracknell, Berkshire, RG12 8SN
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