RE: [tgf] TGF Primer - New Draft

thanks for eagle-eyed error spotting, I'll do a small errata note for the TC meeting. Any more for any more...?

Cheers,

Peter

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From:
Chris Parker

Sent:
15-Nov-11 12:57

To:
Peter F Brown; John Borras

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'TGF TC List'

Subject:
RE: [tgf] TGF Primer - New Draft

Peter

 

I’ve spotted two minor issues of a similar sort to the one John picked up, where changes made in the patterns haven’t yet flowed through to the primer. They are:

 

·        
Line 694: Transformation Business Model needs updating to Transformational Business Model (issue 54, which I think you’ve picked up at every other place in the
 primer, but it might be worth running a search)

·        
Line 699: should read “Roadmap for Transformation” (issue 56, which again seems to have been fixed everywhere but here).

 

Thanks for such a great job.

 

Chris Parker

Managing Partner, CS Transform Ltd, +44 7951 754 060

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Sent: 14 November 2011 14:19

To: John Borras

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Subject: RE: [tgf] TGF Primer - New Draft

 

John,

Well spotted, thanks.

If that is the only problem, I guess we can take it orally at the meeting. If there are substantially more, it may be wiser to release an update. Let's see over the next 48 hours...

Cheers,

Peter

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From:
John Borras

Sent:
14-Nov-11 1:04

To:
Peter F Brown

Cc:
'TGF TC List'

Subject:
RE: [tgf] TGF Primer - New Draft

Peter

 

One slight mis-alignment I’ve spotted.  In the PL at line 909 we say MUST use the Policy Product Matrix etc but the Primer says SHOULD at line 337.  We changed the PL at the last minute so perhaps
 you didn’t follow that through into the Primer?

 

Otherwise looks good to me.

 

John

 

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Sent: 14 November 2011 05:06

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Subject: [tgf] TGF Primer - New Draft

 

Hi,

As promised in my mail of last Thursday (10 November), I am pleased to announce finalisation of a new draft of the TGF Primer.

 

Please refer back to that e-mail for details about the process so far and the next steps.

 

Fewer comments were made against the Primer document. However, a number of further changes have been made in order to align the text with the changes proposed to the Core Patterns document (terminology, update of figures, structure and
 ordering of sections etc).

 

Attached is a .pdf version of the document showing all changes made and comments cross-referencing issues raised or alignment with the Core Patterns document. A .docx version will also be loaded to the OASIS work area, for those of you
 who need access to an editable version.

 

Best regards,

Peter

 

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