Primer update for Tc meeting

John, Chris, all,

I’ve incorporated the three minor changes mentioned by John and Chris in their mails of 14th and 15th Nov respectively, and checked through the document for other occurrences>

 

The revised document is available at:

http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/tgf/download.php/44354

 

and that is the version that we should reference in any TC decision to approve.

 

As a reminder, the only changes compared with the WD05 sent out already, are three minor edits to align the text with the Core Patterns document, which I’d missed in the main review.

 

Cheers,

Peter

 

From:  [mailto:]
On Behalf Of Peter F Brown

Sent: 14 November 2011 15:19

To: John Borras

Cc: 'TGF TC List'

Subject: RE: [tgf] TGF Primer - New Draft

 

John,

Well spotted, thanks.

If that is the only problem, I guess we can take it orally at the meeting. If there are substantially more, it may be wiser to release an update. Let's see over the next 48 hours...

Cheers,

Peter

Peter F Brown

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Sent from my phone - Apologies for brevity and typos: it's hard writing on a moving planet

From:
John Borras

Sent:
14-Nov-11 1:04

To:
Peter F Brown

Cc:
'TGF TC List'

Subject:
RE: [tgf] TGF Primer - New Draft

Peter

 

One slight mis-alignment I’ve spotted.  In the PL at line 909 we say MUST use the Policy Product Matrix etc but the Primer says SHOULD at line 337.  We changed the PL at
 the last minute so perhaps you didn’t follow that through into the Primer?

 

Otherwise looks good to me.

 

John

 

From:
 
[mailto:] On Behalf Of Peter F Brown

Sent: 14 November 2011 05:06

To: 'TGF TC List'

Subject: [tgf] TGF Primer - New Draft

 

Hi,

As promised in my mail of last Thursday (10 November), I am pleased to announce finalisation of a new draft of the TGF Primer.

 

Please refer back to that e-mail for details about the process so far and the next steps.

 

Fewer comments were made against the Primer document. However, a number of further changes have been made in order to align the text with the changes proposed to the Core Patterns document (terminology, update
 of figures, structure and ordering of sections etc).

 

Attached is a .pdf version of the document showing all changes made and comments cross-referencing issues raised or alignment with the Core Patterns document. A .docx version will also be loaded to the OASIS work
 area, for those of you who need access to an editable version.

 

Best regards,

Peter

 

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