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Yet more comments on v3.0.1

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Rogers, Tony <>
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2003-08-25T06:43:10+00:00
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Yet more comments on v3.0.1
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Section 10.5 Value 
sets with entiity keys as values

The third sentence 
should read: "They must be mapped as entity keys everywhere they are used." - 
removing "are" and "else".

 

Section 11, opening 
sentence reads a little oddly. Perhaps "a set of tModels" could be "a basic set 
of tModels"? Or even "a canonical set of tModels"?

 

Tony Rogers

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