Considerations for editorial and typos CR050

Please consider the following comments
for inclusion in CR050 (the typos and editorial Change Request)

keyName has a minLength of 1 in the
v3 schema, but in the spec in the add/set_publisherAssertions sections,
it says " Empty (zero length) keyNames and keyValues are permitted."

Section 10.3.1, elements where maximum
length has increased in v3: It is not clear what the behaviour of a v2
get should return when the entity being got contains things longer than
the maximum length specified by the v2 spec.  Section 10.2.8 suggests
ignoring the length restriction in v2, but is not explicit.

3) Section 10.3.1, empty containers,
refers to: <businessEntity> in <save_business> <tModel>
in <save_tModel> These are required by all v1, v2 and v3, so should
not be listed in this section

Spec chapter 11, many of the "
characters in the XML are not actually " characters but Word's fancy
quotes.  This is only really a problem if you copy and paste the XML
structures out, but it would be nice to get it fixed

Spec 10.3.1 (or 10.4.1 in CR057) says
that in a v2 publish request, any empty containers that are not allowed
in v3 must be removed.  In the case of an empty tModelInstanceDetails,
this is required by the v2 schema and hence must be serialized in a v2
response.  This should not be listed in this section

"9.5.9 Node Sort Order Policy

Each node MUST specify the default sort
order which it supports. A node MAY specify support for optional additional
sort orders. All sort orders are specified via use of sortOrder tModels."
  This should be "collation sequence" everywhere that "sort
order" is written in this section.

Regards,

Andrew Hately

IBM Software Group, Emerging Technologies 

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