On Fri, 5 Feb 2021 09:39:10 -0500 "Michael S. Tsirkin" <> wrote:
> On Thu, Feb 04, 2021 at 12:16:10PM +0100, Cornelia Huck wrote: >
> On Wed, 3 Feb 2021 17:45:53 -0500 > > "Michael S. Tsirkin" <> wrote: > >
> >
> we don't have multiple documents. > >
> we expect to deliver specifications periodically. > > > > >
> Signed-off-by: Michael S. Tsirkin <> > > > --- > >
> charter.html
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> 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) > > > > >
> diff --git a/charter.html b/charter.html > >
> index f3a34f3..11c6f70 100644 > > > --- a/charter.html > > > +++ b/charter.html > > > @@ -101,7 +101,7 @@ > > >
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We anticipate deliverables (1) and (2) to be a single work, and (3) and (4) to be separate works. The projected delivery dates are 12 to 16 months after the first meeting. > > > +
The projected delivery dates for the specifications are each 12 to 16 months.
> > >
> Maybe > > > > "The projected delivery dates for the specifications are a deliverable >
> every 12 to 16 months." > > > > ?
>
> Don't really like the repeated "delivery/deliverable". Do you prefer
> every to each then? I slightly prefer "every"; but would like feedback from a native speaker on that. > > > > > >
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