Looks ok to me.
I did a search for the 2119 lowercase keywords ('may', 'should' ...) and
found that there are instances where they are not capitalized (for
example, in the sec consideration section). If these were intended to be
2119 keywords then to be consistent with our typographical convention we
should capitalize them. If not, we should find suitable alternatives.
2119 does *not* require the keywords to be capitalized, so leaving them
as is imply that they are to be interpreted in the same way as their
capitalized brethren.
-Anish
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Doug Davis wrote:
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> ok - Marc (editors), see if this version looks ok to you.
> -Doug
