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-----Original Message-----
From: Anish Karmarkar [mailto:]
Sent: Wednesday, June 07, 2006 9:49 AM
To: Doug Davis
Cc:
Subject: Re: [ws-rx-editors] Fw: [ws-rx] Comments on WS-RM WD 13 and
WS-RM Policy WD 9
+1 to reordering schema/message examples/wsdl.
On the quotes around "none". Either we should retain the quotes OR if we
wanted to be precise, then include the correct URI:
http://www.w3.org/2005/08/addressing/none
I prefer the latter.
-Anish
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Doug Davis wrote:
>
> So,
> things we should discuss:
>
> - Should we reorder the schema, message examples and wsdl? I think
> Marc's idea sounds right - schema, wsdl and then samples
> - Who has the source for figure 2?
> - Thoughts on quotes around "none" ? Not a biggie but I do prefer
them
> there.
>
> thanks,
> -Doug
>
> ----- Forwarded by Doug Davis/Raleigh/IBM on 06/07/2006 10:36 AM -----
> *Doug Davis/Raleigh/IBM@IBMUS*
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> 06/07/2006 10:39 AM
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> "Marc Goodner" <> cc
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> Subject
> Re: [ws-rx] Comments on WS-RM WD 13 and WS-RM Policy WD 9
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> Marc - thanks for the detailed review - comments inline.
> -Doug
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> "Marc Goodner" <> wrote on 06/05/2006 02:07:29
PM:
> > WS-RM WD 13
> > http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/ws-rx/download.
> > php/18451/wsrm-1.1-spec-wd-13.pdf
> >
> > Line numbers in this document are inaccurate, particularly in >
> Section 2. I only use line numbers below with sections or pages >
> where there are not two of the same.
> >
> > I did not review the state tables given there is another revision
> > planned. Similarly I did not examine the schema, message examples or
> > wsdl in any detail but plan to. Why are these section in that order?
> > Doesn't it make more sense to have the wsdl follow the schema?
> *
> Will discuss with editors.*
>
> > Section 2
> > Change "and Transmits it" to "and transmits it".
> > Change "that Sends" to "that sends"
>
> Fixed (in WD14 in editor's playpen)
>
> > Figure 2 is not legible.
>
> Working on it - but a little mystery makes life exciting :-)
>
> > Section 3.1
> > Line 222, page 11 "none" does not need to be in quotes.
>
> Will discuss with editors but I think it might confuse non-WSA experts
> to not have it in quotes.
>
> > Line 309, page 13 the 2119 term optional is used and not in caps.
>
> Fixed
>
> > Section 3.2
> > Line 347, page 14 the 2119 term may is used and is not in caps.
>
> Fixed
>
> > Section 3.3
> > Line 459, page 16 check for a space between"[URI])" and "of".
>
> Fixed
>
> > Section 3.5
> > Line 530, page 18 change "below" to "Section 3.6".
>
> Fixed
>
> > Section 3.6
> > Line 558, page 19 reference to "Section Request Acknowledgment" is
> > not consistent with references elsewhere in spec. Change "Section >
> Request Acknowledgement" to "Section 3.5".
> > Line 562, page 19 "piggy-backing does not need to be in quotes.
> > Line 615, page 20 strike "Note:" as 2119 text is used in the text
> > that follows it is more than a note.
>
> Fixed
>
> > Section 4
> > The first two paragraphs of this section are practically duplicates
> > of each other. The first paragraph can be stricken by adding a one
> > sentence description of WSRMRequired after the second sentence of >
> the second paragraph. I can raise this as a new issue if that is
> preferable.
> *
> Please do - since those paragraphs have been of some concern to some*
> * people I'd prefer to get agreement on it.*
>
> > Line 670, page 22 end sentence beginning on line 668 after
"detected".
> > Line 676, page 22 change "defined in the version of WS-Addressing
> > used in the message" to "defined in WS-Addressing" as we only >
> reference a single version of Addressing.
> > Line 676, page 22 change "current version" to "W3C Recommendation"
> > Line 678, page 22 update to W3C Rec value, "http://www.w3.
> > org/2005/08/addressing/fault"
> *
> For consistency I did this but I think we need to revisit this since*
> * WSA now says that .../addressing/fault SHOULD only be used for WSA*
> * faults - and we're talking about RM faults in this section. WSA* *
> suggests that other specs define their own URI - or am I reading* *
> this wrong?*
>
> > Line 680, page 22 change "section 4 of WS-Addressing" to "section 6
> > of WS-Addressing SOAP Binding".
> > Line 694, page 22 update to W3C Rec value, "http://www.w3.
> > org/2005/08/addressing/fault"
>
> Fixed
>
> > Section 6
> > Update [WS-Addressing] to point to Recommendation.
> > W3C Recommendation, "Web Services Addressing 1.0 - Core", May 2006.
> > http://www.w3.org/TR/2006/REC-ws-addr-core-20060509/
> >
> > W3C Recommendation, "Web Services Addressing 1.0 - SOAP Binding",
> May 2006.
> > http://www.w3.org/TR/2006/REC-ws-addr-soap-20060509/
> >
> > Update [WS-Policy] to point to W3C Member Submission.
> > W3C Member Submission, "Web Services Policy Framework (WS-Policy),"
> > April 2006.
> > http://www.w3.org/Submission/2006/SUBM-WS-Policy-20060425/
> >
> > Update [WS-PolicyAttachment] to point to W3C Member Submission.
> > W3C Member Submission, "Web Services Policy Attachment
> (WS-PolicyAttachment)
> > ," April 2006.
> >
> http://www.w3.org/Submission/2006/SUBM-WS-PolicyAttachment-20060425/
>
> Fixed
>
> > Section C
> > Line 1469 change "non-normative" to "normative".
>
> Fixed
>
> > Section E
> > Line 1593 the TBD should be completed for PR.
> *
> Can you open an issue so we don't forget about this?*
>
> > WS-RM Policy WD9
> > http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/ws-rx/download.
> > php/18454/wsrmp-1.1-spec-wd-09.pdf
> >
> > Section 4
> > Update [WS-Policy] to point to W3C Member Submission.
> > W3C Member Submission, "Web Services Policy Framework (WS-Policy),"
> > April 2006.
> > http://www.w3.org/Submission/WS-Policy/
> > http://www.w3.org/Submission/2006/SUBM-WS-Policy-20060425/
> >
> > Update [WS-PolicyAttachment] to point to W3C Member Submission.
> > W3C Member Submission,"Web Services Policy Attachment
> (WS-PolicyAttachment)
> > ," April 2006.
> > http://www.w3.org/Submission/WS-PolicyAttachment/
> >
> http://www.w3.org/Submission/2006/SUBM-WS-PolicyAttachment-20060425/
> >
> > Add reference to WSS 1.1 under [WSS] (as is done in WS-RM).
> > Anthony Nadalin, Chris Kaler, Phillip Hallam-Baker, Ronald
> Monzillo, eds. "
> > OASIS Web Services Security:
> > SOAP Message Security 1.1 (WS-Security 2004)", OASIS Standard >
> 200602, February 2006.
>
> Fixed
>
> > Section A
> > Line 253 the TBD should be completed for PR.
> *
> can you include this in the same new issue as the RM spec one?*
