SP with 2nd PR issues resolutions applied

I did not change the status of the doc. I did change the
date so it is clear this is a new copy. I’ve uploaded clean and diff
versions from the PR at these locations.

 

Doc clean:

http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/ws-sx/download.php/23622/ws-securitypolicy-1.2-spec-cd-02-r01.doc

Doc with diff from 2nd PR:

http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/ws-sx/download.php/23620/ws-securitypolicy-1.2-spec-cd-02-r01-diff.doc

 

Pdf clean:

http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/ws-sx/download.php/23621/ws-securitypolicy-1.2-spec-cd-02-r01.pdf

Pdf with diff from 2nd PR:

http://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/ws-sx/download.php/23619/ws-securitypolicy-1.2-spec-cd-02-r01-diff.pdf

 

Here are the details on where the changes are in the doc and
pdf versions listed above. 

 

PR026

section 1.4.1 -- line 129

The text appears to be truncated. The RFC reference is omitted.

Proposal: Add the RFC 2119 reference. 

MG: Applied, line 93 in the doc version, 131 in pdf.

 

sections 5.2.1, 5.2.2 -- lines 727, 732:

It references attribute, while it is talking about an element.

Proposal: Change "attribute" to
"element". 

MG: Applied, lines 691/692 and  696/697 in the doc
version, 729/730 and 734/735 in the pdf.

 

section 5.2.4 -- line 752 :

Strange text "to as multiple tokens as it sees fit."

Proposal: Change text "to as many tokens as it sees
fit." Or change to ", and apply to as many tokens as it sees
fit." 

MG: Applied, line 716 in the doc version, 754 in pdf.

 

section 5.4.1 -- line 832 :

Slash "/" is missing.

Proposal: Add "/" before "sp:Issuer". 

MG: Applied, line 796 in the doc version, 834 in pdf.

Note, I also removed an extraneous space after this line, 799/837
in doc/pdf.

 

section 5.4.7 -- line 1255:

wsp:Policy is now required, and its contents are optional. But the
"?" is in the wrong place.

Proposal: Put the "?" on line 1257 rather than on line 1255. 

MG: Applied, line 1211, 1213 in the doc version, 1249, 1251
in pdf.

 

sections 8.2, 8.3, 8.4 -- lines 2297, 2352, 2409:

Spurious "|" symbol.

Proposal: Delete the "|" symbol or add ellipses after it
"...". 

MG: Applied, lines 2246, 2301, 2358 in the doc version, 2284,
2339, 2396 in the pdf.

 

section 10.1 -- line 2773 :

Confusing text.

Proposal: Clarify the text "element is a policy assertion indicates",
maybe by adding "that" before "indicates". 

MG: Applied, line 2721 in the doc version, 2759 in pdf.

 

PR027

section 5.2.2 -- line 733:

verb usage

Proposal: Replace "points" with "pointing" 

MG: Applied, line 697 in the doc version, 735 in pdf.

 

section 5.4.11 -- line 1552 :

plural agreement

Proposal: Replace "by another specifications" with "in other specifications"

MG: Applied, line 1501 in doc version, 1539 in pdf.

 

section 8.6 -- line 2460 :

only modifies when, not used

Proposal: Replace "only used when" with "used only when" 

MG: Applied, line 2409 in the doc version, 2447 in pdf.