Hi all,
I think I have finished my first round of review of Primer.
I have finished most chapters already. I am only half done with
chapter 7. In the middle of my review, I am thinking we may want to
have a "slimmer" approach for chapter 7:
We may want to trim down this section. We don’t need to show all
activities usage here again. It's kind of repeating what we said in
chapter 4-6.
How about draft a complete process first. Then, illustrates the
development by decomposing in a step-by-step fashion ?? And, it would
be nice to make pieces of the actual example work together.
I will work with Khanderao to check in a verison into CVS including
Khanderao's changes for Chapter 3 and including my changes and comments
for the whole Primer doc.
Regarding my changes: they are 90% for technical corrections (e.g.
xpath / xml syntax issue) and applying terminologies and editing style
consistently, which should not be controversial. If there are some
changes that you guys don't like, we can go over them and reject those
changes as needed.
Thanks!
Regards,
Alex Yiu
Khanderao Kand wrote:
Thanks. I
will now update chapter 3.
Charlton Barreto wrote:
I have made some updates to the WS-BPEL
Primer in CVS, including adding content for Section 8.1. The latest
version is attached as well for your convenience.
Cheers,
-Charlton.
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