Re: Update to hierarchical proposal w minor fixes

Hi Erik,

As mentioned in off-list question (below), attached is "final" update
to hierarchical profile which fixes some remaining typos, subject to
results of discussion at tomorrow's tc meeting on doc status.

    Thanks,

    Rich

Hi Erik,

First, I want you to know that I am aware and appreciate the tremendous
effort you have made to make XACML 3.0 a success.

So, knowing that, I am reluctant to trouble you w relative
trivialities, but I went over the changes I made to the hier spec and
found a few cosmetic typos that I have included in the attached
version. One typo was potentially significant, which was I accidentally
removed the 2nd trailing "]" on line 258, which could raise ambiguity
as to the whether a <doc-node-xsegment> was required to precede
the other node-xsegments, which it is.

What I did was accept all changes on the draft you sent out yesterday,
and did the ctrl-A,F9 to update the TOC and then fixed the above plus
some other relatively minor, but potentially confusing, typos in
section 2.2.1.

If you would prefer, I could do the same changes w/o doing the accept
all changes first if it makes it easier, however, I thought if you
could see exactly what I did on this minor update, it would be easier
to accept and process.

Apology for any inconvenience.

   Thanks,

   Rich

Erik Rissanen wrote:

  
Hi Rich,

  

Thanks. I see that you did not used the final public review version
which had some editorial fixes by Mary. I will copy over your changes
to the latest version.

  

Best regards,

Erik

  

On 2009-12-14 08:52, Rich.Levinson wrote:
  Hi
Erik,

    

Attached is update to hierarchical proposal profile that we agreed on
at F2F, with a couple of minor changes that hopefully can help with the
editing of the final versions:

    
      
replaces rfc2396 w rfc3986

      
fixes a typo where namespace-uri was accidentally entered as
uri-namespace

      
adds some clarifying text to the notes at end of section
2.1.1,
explaining further what can generally be ignored by regexp processing

    
Note: the changes, when turned on, are wrt to the original release with
the public review.

    

    Thanks,

    Rich

    

  
  

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