Re: [xacml] Changes required to submitted document - XACML TC - Requestfor Second Public Review

Oh, I'm sorry. I thought this was about the XACML core.

Erik

On 2010-04-28 08:01, Harold Lockhart wrote:

  
  
  
This request is for IPC. Erik is not the editor.

  
 

  
Hal

  
    
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    Subject: Re: [xacml] Changes required to submitted document
- XACML TC - Request for Second Public Review

    

    

Hi Eric,
    

    

    
  Unfortunately that's not what was submitted; Hal's request
dated 22 April is incorporated below.

    

    

    
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From: Harold
Lockhart <>

    
Subject: XACML
TC - Request for Second Public Review

    
Date: April
22, 2010 10:40:56 AM EDT

    
To: Tc-Admin
(E-mail) <>

    
Cc: Bill
Parducci (E-mail) <>, Tolbert,
John W <>

    

    

    

    
At the April 8 meeting of the XACML TC, the TC voted to
request a second public review of 15 days for XACML Intellectual
Property Control  (IPC) profile Version 1.0 Committee draft 2.

    

The document contains a designated cross-reference as defined in TC
Process section 2.19. It is understood that this may delay the date the
spec reaches approved status.

    

The designated cross-reference is:

    

eXtensible Access Control Markup Language (XACML) Version 3.0 Committee
Draft 03

    http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/download.php/37088/xacml-3.0-core-spec-cd-03-en.zip

It is expected to become an OASIS Standard by December 31, 2010.

    

    

The minutes of the meeting are here:

    

    http://lists.oasis-open.org/archives/xacml/201004/msg00012.html

    

The document is here:

    

    http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/download.php/37055/xacml-3.0-ipc-v1-spec-cd-02-en.doc

    

    http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/download.php/37077/xacml-3%200-ipc-v1-spec-cd-02-en.pdf

    

    http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/download.php/37054/xacml-3.0-ipc-v1-spec-cd-02-en.htm

    

The announcement of the first public review is here:

    

    http://lists.oasis-open.org/archives/tc-announce/200910/msg00013.html

    

The log of changes made since the first public review is here:

    

    http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/download.php/36727/IPC%20change%20log.doc

    

    

    

Hal Lockhart

Bill Pardicci

    
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On Apr 27, 2010, at 9:29 PM, Erik Rissanen wrote:

    
    
      
Kim,

      

I don't know what went wrong, but you have been reviewing the wrong
version. It is CD-03 which has been (or should have been) submitted to
public review and I believe these issues (or at least most of them)
have been already fixed.

      

Best regards,

Erik

      

On 2010-04-27 15:10, Kim Goolsby wrote:
      
        

        
http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/TCADMIN-138

        

        

        http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/download.php/37055/xacml-3.0-ipc-v1-spec-cd-02-en.doc 

        http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/download.php/37077/xacml-3%200-ipc-v1-spec-cd-02-en.pdf 

        http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/download.php/37054/xacml-3.0-ipc-v1-spec-cd-02-en.htm 
        

        

        
As
I check this spec for QC, I've noted the following changes that need to
be made:

        

        
          
The
specification title, 'profile' should be initial cap.

            

             

          
The stage
should be initial cap.

            

             

          
The HTML as
created out of Word cannot be uploaded by itself; any images or other
external resources will be lost. When saving as HTML Word creates both
an html file and a folder that contains these resources. The resulting
set must be uploaded as a zip into Kavi in order to be complete. 

            

             

          
This Version
link has changed directories from the original CD01 upload. The
directory location must remain the same. In addition, pdf and html
files must be listed. Please designate one file as 'Authoritative'.

            

             

          
Previous
version: the link is not in the proper location of the CD01 files. In
addition, pdf and html files must be listed.

  

          
The Latest
Version URIs are incorrect and do not correspond to the CD01 files. 

            

             

          
Related work:
this should be hypertext linked to the actual specification referenced.

            

             

          
Status links,
which were correct in CD01, are once again broken. 

            

             

          
Notices, last
paragraph, please remove bracketed section, which reads ' [insert
specific trademarked names and abbreviations here] & need to link
OASIS to its homepage]'.

            

             

          
OASIS
references, which were correct in CD01, are improperly formatted. 

            

             

          
Please either
remove extraneous links to XACMLIntro or provide full citation
information for each. 

        
        

        

        

        

        
I'm
happy to answer any questions you might have about these changes.

        

        

        

        

        

        

        

        

        

        

        

        

        

        

        

        

        

        

        

        

        

        

        

        
Regards,

        
Kim

        

        

        

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