Re: [xacml] Changes required to submitted document - XACML TC - Requestfor Second Public Review

Kim,

The fixed document is here:

http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/download.php/37645/xacml-profile-saml2.0-v2-spec-cd-03-en.zip

Best regards,

Erik

On 2010-04-27 21:13, Kim Goolsby wrote:
http://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/TCADMIN-141
  

  

  
http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/download.php/37094/xacml-profile-saml2.0-v2-spec-cd-03-en.zip 

  

  

  

  
As
I check this spec for QC, I've noted the following changes that need to
be made:

  

  
    
Previous version:
the link is not in the proper location of the CD01 file. 

      

      

    
Chair(s) &
Editor(s): Please activate these e-mail links. 

      

      

    
Please add
Appendix A to the Table of Contents. 

      

      

    
Normative
Reference [SAML-PROFILE] has an incorrect hyperlink. Please change the
hyperlink to match the text; (http://docs.oasis-open.org/security/saml/v2.0/saml-profiles-2.0-os.pdf)
is correct. 

      

      

    
Normative
Reference [WSS-Core] has an incorrect hyperlink. Please change the
hyperlink to match the text; (http://docs.oasis-open.org/ws-sx/ws-trust/v1.4/os/ws-trust-1.4-spec-os.doc)
is correct. 

      

      

    
Appendix A has a
bad page break - the header & the table are on separate pages.
Please 

move table up. 

  
  

  

  

  

  
I'm
happy to answer any questions you might have about these changes.

  

  

  

  

  

  

  

  

  

  

  

  

  
Thanks,

  
Kim

  

  

  

  

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Kim Goolsby

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