[public review feedback] TC Admin comments on JSON Profile of XACML 3.0 v1.1 csprd01

Members of the XACML TC,Â

In preparing your content for public review, we encountered the following items that we bring to your attention.Â

- There are multiple broken links throughout the document (probably every intended internal cross-reference), all of which are linked to some variant of: "xacml-json-http-v1.0-wd21.doc#_xxx". This was almost certainly caused by the MS-Word "save as" process, which re-homed the relative (not fully-qualified) links to a previous working draft number. For instance, in Table 1, there are two references to [XML Datatypes] which have hyperlinks pointing to "xacml-json-http-v1.0-wd21.doc#_Normative_References". These are broken links in the published document. (Note the TC's source document itself is "...-wd23.doc".)

- There is a broken link in the URI for the Normative Reference [XACMLMDP]. The hyperlink has an embedded space character at the end. However, note that it would be better to update the reference to use the most recent link: http://docs.oasis-open.org/xacml/3.0/multiple/v1.0/xacml-3.0-multiple-v1.0.html.

- Another reference, to [XACMLREST], should be updated to v1.1.

Let us know if you have any questions.Â

Best regards,Â

Paul

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