Generally looks quite good. Just a couple of editorial nits:
Top of page 5: important to proper [-> properly] distinguish
Bottom of page 7: but these elements will be declared any way
since the domain must be referenced [^by] the shell document type
paul
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> Subject: [dita-adoption] Groups - Feature Overview: Domain and topic
> integration (domain_and_topic_integration_v0_2.pdf) uploaded
>
> Hello everyone,
>
> Please find an first draft of the article on Feature #12010: Domain and
> topic integration. The document has been reviewed by Eliot Kimber and
> he
> was so kind to provide me with some valuable improvements. I hope that
> you
> find the article readable after all specializations are not the easiest
> thing for adopters to grasp. Please send me any comments you have.
>
> Thanks, Marc
>
>
> -- M.Y. Speyer
>
> The document named Feature Overview: Domain and topic integration
> (domain_and_topic_integration_v0_2.pdf) has been submitted by M.Y.
> Speyer
> to the OASIS DITA Adoption TC document repository.
>
> Document Description:
> In DITA 1.2 the integration of domains and topics has been unified to
> improve design flexibility and to simplify the DITA specialization
> constructs. By relaxing the restriction from what modules may inherit
> from,
> vocabulary elements can now be shared between different kinds of
> modules.
>
> View Document Details:
> http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/document.php?document_id=35163
>
> Download Document:
> http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/download.php/35163/domain_and_topic_integration_v0_2.pdf