Comments from reviewing task model feature article

Hi 
JoAnn,

 

Here are my comments 
(marked up as draft-comments). Nothing major. I think this is ready to approve 
today with the changes I've requested (and any others other reviewers may 
suggest).

 

Gershon

 

  
  

    
      
        
        

          

        

          
            
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