RE: [dita-adoption] Comments from reviewing task model feature article

From
Bruce Nevin (bnevin) <>
Date
2010-06-07T15:44:39+00:00
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RE: [dita-adoption] Comments from reviewing task model feature article
Prerequisite is a single word, 
not hyphenated, and post-requisite with or without hyphen does not appear in the 
RH unabridged dictionary. 

 

When referring to sequence of 
elements, it seems to me best to use element names, e.g. 

 

               
"the DITA Strict Task Model [...] requires that <prereq> precede 
<context> in 
the
                
<taskbody> [NB: not conbody!] and does not permit titles for 
<prereq>, 

                
<context>, <result>, or <postreq>."

 

instead of

 

               
the DITA Strict Task Model [...] requires that pre-requisites precede 
context in 
the
                
<conbody> and does not permit titles for pre-requisites, context, result, 
or
                
post-requisite content units.

 

Certainly the conbody copy/paste 
error should be fixed.

  

  
  From: Gershon Joseph (gerjosep) 
  
Sent: Monday, June 07, 2010 5:19 AM
To: Joann 
  Hackos
Cc: DITA Adoption TC
Subject: [dita-adoption] 
  Comments from reviewing task model feature article

  

  
Hi 
  JoAnn,

  
 

  
Here are my 
  comments (marked up as draft-comments). Nothing major. I think this is ready 
  to approve today with the changes I've requested (and any others other 
  reviewers may suggest).

  
 

  
Gershon

  
 

  

  

  
    
    

      
        
          
          

            

          

            
              
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