RE: [dita-adoption] Comments from reviewing task model feature article

OK -- done

 

JoAnn Hackos PhD

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From: Bruce Nevin
(bnevin) [mailto:] 

Sent: Monday, June 07, 2010 9:44
AM

To: Gershon Joseph (gerjosep);
JoAnn Hackos

Cc: DITA Adoption TC

Subject: RE: [dita-adoption]
Comments from reviewing task model feature article

 

Prerequisite
is a single word, not hyphenated, and post-requisite with or without hyphen
does not appear in the RH unabridged dictionary. 

 

When
referring to sequence of elements, it seems to me best to use element
names, e.g. 

 

              
"the DITA Strict Task Model [...] requires that <prereq>
precede <context> in the

               
<taskbody> [NB: not conbody!] and does not permit titles for
<prereq>, 

               
<context>, <result>, or <postreq>."

 

instead
of

 

              
the DITA Strict Task Model [...] requires that pre-requisites precede
context in the

               
<conbody> and does not permit titles for pre-requisites, context, result,
or

               
post-requisite content units.

 

Certainly
the conbody copy/paste error should be fixed.

 

From: Gershon
Joseph (gerjosep) 

Sent: Monday, June 07, 2010 5:19
AM

To: Joann Hackos

Cc: DITA Adoption TC

Subject: [dita-adoption] Comments
from reviewing task model feature article

Hi JoAnn,

 

Here are my comments (marked up as draft-comments). Nothing
major. I think this is ready to approve today with the changes I've requested
(and any others other reviewers may suggest).

 

Gershon

 

 

  
  
   

    
    

    
   

   

    
    
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