Bob,
At this point I would suggest that the Awareness team defer to yours and the
ExC's editorial decisions. Thus, I recommend that Carol make appropriate
revisions (unless there is not consensus among the ExC) and release the
report.
Rachel
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Subject: Re: Final Press Release of Orlando Meeting
Comments:
- I think the "Create a Single Global XML Framework
Solution" is just awkward. I know that this has been
debated, but something like "Create a Single Global
XML Business Framework" is better.
- I would change "listserv discussions" to be "email
mailing list discussions".
- I would move the Webber quote to be the paragraph
before the last ("The next meeting ...").
The date on the top should probably be changed or omitted.
Bob
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