RE: Final Press Release of Orlando Meeting

Yes, please let's get this release out ASAP. It's been more than a month
since the meeting, and this news may be perceived as a little stale.


> -----Original Message-----
> From: [email protected]
> [mailto:[email protected]]On Behalf Of Rachel
> Foerster
> Sent: Wednesday, March 08, 2000 9:11 PM
> To: [email protected]
> Cc: 'Bill Smith (E-mail)'; 'Klaus-Dieter Naujok (E-mail)'; 'Ray Walker
> (E-mail)'; 'Carol Geyer (E-mail)'; 'ebXML Marketing Awareness Education
> (E-mail)'
> Subject: RE: Final Press Release of Orlando Meeting
>
>
> Bob,
>
> At this point I would suggest that the Awareness team defer to
> yours and the
> ExC's editorial decisions. Thus, I recommend that Carol make appropriate
> revisions (unless there is not consensus among the ExC) and release the
> report.
>
> Rachel
>
> -----Original Message-----
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> [mailto:[email protected]]On Behalf Of
> [email protected]
> Sent: Tuesday, March 07, 2000 12:48 PM
> To: [email protected]
> Cc: Bill Smith (E-mail); Klaus-Dieter Naujok (E-mail); Ray Walker
> (E-mail); Carol Geyer (E-mail); ebXML Marketing Awareness Education
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> Subject: Re: Final Press Release of Orlando Meeting
>
>
> Comments:
>
> - I think the "Create a Single Global XML Framework
>   Solution" is just awkward. I know that this has been
>   debated, but something like "Create a Single Global
>   XML Business Framework" is better.
> - I would change "listserv discussions" to be "email
>   mailing list discussions".
> - I would move the Webber quote to be the paragraph
>   before the last ("The next meeting ...").
>
> The date on the top should probably be changed or omitted.
>
> Bob
>
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