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Paulsen,Norm (ECCC) <>
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2021-10-09T01:29:34+00:00
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wd04
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In wd04

 

Line 352 – the word ”an” should be “the”

Line 353 – should be… (i.e. a “wind” event leading to a “wind” alert)

Line 367 – missing the word “all”, should be…all associated to a “tropical storm” event.

Line 368 – two spaces at the end of the line

Line 369 – two spaces after… However

Line 369 – should be… “smoke” event

Line 403 – missing comma after the word “both”

Line 404 – The word Practices should start a new paragraph

 

An extra entry in Appendix B... OET-144 Heavy Rain 

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Not sure how that got inserted in there. Its not even alphabetical so something seems wrong.

 

Norm Paulsen

Data Architecture and Standards | Architecture des données et des normes

Forecast Systems Integration & Innovation
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