Norm,
I note that I completed the changes inline below with "--Done" except for the second "Line 369"
which I believe was just a transposition for "Line 396" where I
made the change.
Rather than make a new working draft, I replaced the existing
version with a new revision without a new filename. I will
continue this for any further changes.
Cheers,
Rex
On 10/8/2021 6:29 PM, Paulsen,Norm
(ECCC) wrote:
Rex
In wd04
Line 352 – the word ”an” should be “the” --Done
Line 353 – should be… (i.e. a “wind” event
leading to a “wind” alert) --Done
Line 367 – missing the word “all”, should
be…all associated to a “tropical storm” event. --Done
Line 368 – two spaces at the end of the
line --Done
Line 369 – two spaces after… However --Done
Line 369 – should be… “smoke” event (took a bit of looking, but I think this
should be Line 396) --Done
Line 403 – missing comma after the word
“both” --Done
Line 404 – The word Practices should start
a new paragraph --Done
An extra entry in Appendix B... OET-144
Heavy Rain --Done and the code was automatically corrected
-
Not sure how that got inserted
in there. Its not even alphabetical so something seems wrong.
Norm Paulsen
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