Norm,
I didn't touch the TC
Front Matter. I'm not sure about that so I am including Chet for
the question of changing copyright notice to 2021. Chet, could
you also advise us on the matter of keeping a version of the
document with all markup left in for the purpose of having a
redline supporting a change log that will largely be links to
the changes documented in Jira where each issue also includes
the date of the meeting notes where the changes are minuted.
Norm, I will add a
revision with new TOC, replacing existing document in the SC
Committee Notes folder. I should probably wait until you've done
your comparison, or do you want the revision with the updated
TOC uploaded before you do the comparison?
I left the markup in so
changes can be checked more easily than it is with a revision
that has accepted all changes for a clean copy. I will do that
before submitting the whole package to TC Admin requesting
publication after the TC votes positively (we hope) to approve
the Event Terms List.
Elysa, should we ask
for expedited TC Admin processing so that we have the TC final
and the TC Admin final document?
Cheers,
Rex
On 10/11/2021 9:18 AM, Paulsen,Norm
(ECCC) wrote:
Rex
The copyright
notice still says 2020. Is that correct?
The table of
contents is not up to date.
The document is
marked with all the changes? Was it supposed to be?
I will do a
look through and comparison in the morning.
Norm
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On Behalf Of Rex Brooks
Sent: October 8, 2021 10:35 PM
To: Paulsen,Norm (ECCC)
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Subject: [emergency-cap] Re: wd04
Norm,
I note that I completed the changes inline below with "--Done" except for the second
"Line 369" which I believe was just a transposition for "Line
396" where I made the change.
Rather than make a new working draft, I replaced the existing
version with a new revision without a new filename. I will
continue this for any further changes.
Cheers,
Rex
On 10/8/2021 6:29 PM, Paulsen,Norm (ECCC)
wrote:
Rex
In wd04
Line 352 – the word ”an” should be “the”
--Done
Line 353 – should be… (i.e. a “wind”
event leading to a “wind” alert)
--Done
Line 367 – missing the word “all”, should
be…all associated to a “tropical storm” event.
--Done
Line 368 – two spaces at the end of the
line
--Done
Line 369 – two spaces after… However
--Done
Line 369 – should be… “smoke” event (took a bit of looking, but I think
this should be Line 396) --Done
Line 403 – missing comma after the word
“both”
--Done
Line 404 – The word Practices should
start a new paragraph
--Done
An extra entry in Appendix B... OET-144
Heavy Rain --Done and the code was automatically corrected
1.
Not sure how that got inserted
in there. Its not even alphabetical so something seems
wrong.
Norm Paulsen
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