I'll incorporate this into the next version. Can people have any other
changes to me by Monday?
thanks,
Lauren
Jirka Kosek wrote:
> Lauren Wood wrote:
>
>> Next version, to get rid of the split infinitive I added... any more
>> comments?
>
>
> That reminds me, that I should look into some grammar book what that
> split infinitive is ;)
>
>> 2. External identifiers may require protocols that are not
>> accessible to all of the tools on a single computer system. An
>> external identifier that is addressed with the ftp: protocol, for
>> example, is not accessible
>
>
> I would prefer "FTP protocol", as "ftp:" is technically just name of URL
> scheme.
>
> Otherwise excellent work, thanks!
>
> Jirka
