Re: [pbd-se] Groups - pbd-se-v1 0-wd04R1.docx uploaded

Dear Dawn,

Thank you very much for slugging away at this and bringing it to completion -- I applaud your efforts! Your continued work and dedication will make this a first class privacy standard. And many thanks to John for his latest invaluable edits! 

Kind regards,

Ann

Ann Cavoukian, Ph.D.

Commissioner 

On Jun 6, 2014, at 5:06 AM, "Dawn Jutla" <> wrote:

Submitter's message

Dear TC members:

Please find a quick update incorporating John's edits. I also took academic liberty in addressing his comment on internal consistency and lack of normative statements in Section 3.

I started us off with default SHALL's in Section 3 and took further liberty to do the same in a very few places in Section 2 for alignment. We will rely on consensus in future TC discussions (leveraging the experience of our policymakers and software engineers
 in industry) to move any aligned subset of these to SHOULD, MAY, MUST etc.

Please refer to Gershon's last email for upcoming PbD-SE meeting times, and replace the link to the Version 4 document embedding in his email with this one.

Thanking you for your time and dedication to the OASIS emerging privacy standards. With your active input in nurturing and maturing them, we may be instrumental in aiding more organizations to do privacy governance better. Dawn.

-- Dr. Dawn Jutla

Document Name: 
pbd-se-v1 0-wd04R1.docx

Description

Working Document Version 1 Revision 4 - Update with John's edits and

comments 

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Submitter: Dr. Dawn Jutla

Group: OASIS Privacy by Design Documentation for Software Engineers (PbD-SE) TC

Folder: Documents

Date submitted: 2014-06-06 02:07:07