Comments for SPML Specification and Binding Drafts

Title: Comments for SPML Specification and Binding Drafts 

Hi,

Comments for SPML bindings draft:

1) Section 2.1.1.1, the table in line 68 is showing "deleteRequest"as SPML Respond (second column)  instead "deleteResponse".

Comments for SPML specification draft:

1) Line 169: Why Introduction section starts on 5 instead 1.

2) Line 404: it refers to section 6 but it seems to be the wrong section.

3) Line 415: "isone" must be break it onto two words "is one".

4) Line 460: the addResponse picture shows 

<spml:identifierType = "urn:oasis:names:tc:SPML:1:0#EMailAddress">

they should be separated

<spml:identifier type = "urn:oasis:names:tc:SPML:1:0#EMailAddress">

5) Line 608: missing SAML subject sample.

6) Line 757: several erros in the the sample:

- missing "spml:" in 

<providerIdentifier providerIDType="urn:oasis:names:tc:SPML:1:0#URN"> should be

        <providerID>urn:oasis:names:tc:SPML</spml:providerID>

- this

<spmlIdentifier schemaIDType="urn:oasis:names:tc:SPML:1:0#GenericString">

should be 

<schemaIdentifier schemaIDType="urn:oasis:names:tc:SPML:1:0#GenericString">

7) Line 782: several errors in the sample:

- this

<spml:providerID>1.3.6.1.4.868.2.4.1.2.1.1.1.3.3562</providerID>

should be

<spml:providerID>1.3.6.1.4.868.2.4.1.2.1.1.1.3.3562</spml:providerID>

- this

<spmlIdentifier schemaIDType="urn:oasis:names:tc:SPML:1:0#GenericString">

should be

<schemaIdentifier schemaIDType="urn:oasis:names:tc:SPML:1:0#GenericString">

8) Line 859: Missing several "spml:" in the sample.

9) Line 864: Missing several "spml:" in the sample.

10) Line 873: Missing several "spml:" in the sample.

11) Line 893: There is an "=" that should not be there in first line of sample. Not sure if make sense to have a requestID for this sample since this is a synchronous request.

12) Line 897: Not sure if make sense to have a requestID for this sample since this is a synchronous request.

13) Line 902: Missing several "spml:" in the sample.

14) Line 907: Missing a "spml:" in the sample.

15) Line 913: Missing several "spml:" in the sample.

16) Line 919: Missing several "spml:" in the sample. Also, "spml:AddResponse" should be "spml:addResponse"

17) Line 1014: At tne end of line "SpmlRequsest" should be "SpmlRequest"

18) Line 1133: The first column second row of the table shows "paralell" and it shoul be "exit".

19) Line 1423: "PDP" should read "PSP" 

Thanks,

Jesus Fernandez

Computer Associates

Programmer

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