[PATCH 1/5] introduction: tweak text as suggested by pbonzini

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Rusty Russell <>
Date
2014-02-06T06:38:00+00:00
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[PATCH 1/5] introduction: tweak text as suggested by pbonzini
Cornelia Huck <> writes:
> On Thu, 30 Jan 2014 18:10:23 +0200
> "Michael S. Tsirkin" <> wrote:
>
>> explicitly say driver/device or use passive form
>> as appropriate.
>>
>>
Cc: Arun Subbarao <>
>> Signed-off-by: Michael S. Tsirkin <>
>> ---
>>  content.tex | 18 ++++++++++

--------

>>  1 file changed, 10 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-)
>>
>
>> @@ -663,12 +664,12 @@ device), so we keep a counter of how many we've added:
>>  \subsubsection{Updating The Index Field}\label{sec:General Initialization And Device Operation / Device Operation / Supplying Buffers to The Device / Updating The Index Field}
>>
>>  Once the index field of the virtqueue is updated, the device will
>> -be able to access the descriptor chains we've created and the
>> +be able to access the descriptor chains that driver created and the
>
> s/driver/the driver/ ?
>
> (also in various places below)

Yes, by my count there are four.  With that changed:

Acked-by: Rusty Russell <>

Thanks,
Rusty.