Only one nit from me. In RMP, note the unnecessary
“the”:
“Note that when there are multiple
policy alternatives the of the RM Assertion, the Delivery Assurance on
each MUST NOT conflict.”
Couple of comments:
Should MC be CD01? I don’t have strong feelings, just
asking.
Appendixes in MC, RM and RMP TOCs are not links. Is there some
tooling problem that prevents that from working?
I have not clicked all the links in MC, RM and RMP, but the
internal references I tried at random and the active TOC ones seem to be OK.
From: Doug Davis
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Sent: Friday, February 02, 2007 11:58 AM
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Subject: [ws-rx-editors] CD ready
Importance: High
All,
the CD5
folder in the editor's area contains all of the files for CD5 - please take a
look and if they look ok I'll post them to the main TC page. But I do
need at least a couple of +1's :-)
thanks
-Doug
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