RE: [ws-rx-editors] CD ready

Agreed, go for it. Guess it’s time to start on the html. With
any luck we can have that in shape by next week’s call.

 

From: Doug Davis
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Sent: Friday, February 02, 2007 4:17 PM

To: Marc Goodner

Cc: 

Subject: RE: [ws-rx-editors] CD ready

 

Marc, 

  thanks
for the review.  I fixed the 'nit'.  As for MC being 01 vs 05 - dunno
- just picked 05 to be consistent with the others.  Can easily switch it
if people think we should. 

As for the
Appendixes - I'm stumped - I've been trying to get OO to turn those into links
all day w/o luck.  Will keep trying. 

Guess I'll
upload the doc for the full TC to review. 

thanks

-Doug

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Only
one nit from me. In RMP, note the unnecessary “the”: 

“Note that when there are multiple policy alternatives the
of the RM Assertion, the Delivery Assurance on each MUST NOT conflict.”

 

Couple
of comments: 

Should
MC be CD01? I don’t have strong feelings, just asking. 

 

Appendixes
in MC, RM and RMP TOCs are not links. Is there some tooling problem that
prevents that from working? 

I
have not clicked all the links in MC, RM and RMP, but the internal references I
tried at random and the active TOC ones seem to be OK. 

 

 

From: Doug Davis
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Sent: Friday, February 02, 2007 11:58 AM

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Subject: [ws-rx-editors] CD ready

Importance: High 

  

All, 

 the CD5 folder in the editor's area contains all of the files for CD5 -
please take a look and if they look ok I'll post them to the main TC page.
 But I do need at least a couple of +1's :-) 

thanks

-Doug

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