Tom,
A few comments below...
On 16-Jul-04 14:18, Tom Rutt wrote:
> Proposed clarification text to accommodate Chris Ferris comments – second
> batch
>
> Comment 4: Improper reference for ws security
This was comment 3. Thanks for filling in the details I left out of my
"3,4,6,8,10" email.
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> Comment 8: Definition of PollRequest message
...
> “
> PollRequest Message:
> A message sent by the Sending RMP to the Receiving RMP that requests that
> it respond with RM-Reply information.“
> “
I would prefer we use the suggestion I made earlier which avoids the
passive voice and describes a requirement not made clear elsewhere in the
specification:
"A message the Sending RMP sends to the Receiving RMP, requesting
RM-Replies for identified earlier Reliable Messages. Support for this
message is REQUIRED as part of the Poll RM-Reply pattern (see section
2.5.3). This message MAY also be used to augment other RM-Reply patterns."
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more later,
doug
