RE: [xacml-editors] Errors in 12/03/02 draft specification

Title: RE: [xacml-editors] Errors in 12/03/02 draft specification

Anne - I have now implemented all of these.  The first one does not appear as a problem in the Word version.  All the best.  Tim.

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From: Anne Anderson [mailto:]

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Subject: [xacml-editors] Errors in 12/03/02 draft specification

1. This may be just StarOffice sensitivities, but in Sections 5.9

   <SubjectMatch>, 5.13 <ResourceMatch>, and 5.17 <ActionMatch>,

   in the schema fragments, a header-formatted line saying

   '<xs:element ref="xacml:AttributeValue"/>' appears where the

   actual schema element for an AttributeValue should appear.

2. In A.9 Matching elements, the footnote starting with "The

   order of the arguments..." should be entirely removed.  With

   the change in argument order for Matching elements, this

   footnote is no longer needed and no longer applies.

3. In A.9 Matching elements, following the list of "XACML

   standard functions that may be used...", the text does not

   reflect the most recently approved changes attached

   http://lists.oasis-open.org/archives/xacml-comment/200212/msg00000.html

   which allow for extension functions, so long as they return

   Boolean and accept (AttributeValue, AttributeDesignator).

4. "Appendix E. Revision history" does not reflect the comments

   implemented in Simon's revision.  That revision's "What"

   column should include: #0039, #0040, #0057, 

5. "Appendix E. Revision history" for Draft OS V1.0 should

   include: 0018b, 0032a.  It should NOT include 0057.

6. Tim, I think you are unclear about the changes intended for

   #36.  Here is an ASCII version of the exact text:

In Appendix B.4 DataTypes, change:

  The following data type identifiers are defined by XML Schema

  and XQuery.

  ---------------------------------------------------------------

  http://www.w3.org/2001/XMLSchema:string

  http://www.w3.org/2001/XMLSchema:boolean

  http://www.w3.org/2001/XMLSchema:integer

  http://www.w3.org/2001/XMLSchema:double

  http://www.w3.org/2001/XMLSchema:date

  http://www.w3.org/2001/XMLSchema:dateTime

  http://www.w3.org/2001/XMLSchema:anyURI

  http://www.w3.org/2001/XMLSchema:hexBinary

  http://www.w3.org/2001/XMLSchema:base64Binary

  http://www.w3.org/2002/08/xquery-functions:dayTimeDuration

  http://www.w3.org/2002/08/xquery-functions:yearMonthDuration

  ----------------------------------------------------------------

to:

  The following data type identifiers are defined by XML Schema.

  ---------------------------------------------------------------

  http://www.w3.org/2001/XMLSchema:string

  http://www.w3.org/2001/XMLSchema:boolean

  http://www.w3.org/2001/XMLSchema:integer

  http://www.w3.org/2001/XMLSchema:double

  http://www.w3.org/2001/XMLSchema:date

  http://www.w3.org/2001/XMLSchema:dateTime

  http://www.w3.org/2001/XMLSchema:anyURI

  http://www.w3.org/2001/XMLSchema:hexBinary

  http://www.w3.org/2001/XMLSchema:base64Binary

  ---------------------------------------------------------------

  The following data type identifiers correspond to the

  dayTimeDuration and yearMonthDuration data types defined in the

  XQuery specification [XQO Sections 8.2.2 and 8.2.1,

  respectively].

  ----------------------------------------------------------------

  http://www.w3.org/2002/08/xquery-functions:dayTimeDuration

  http://www.w3.org/2002/08/xquery-functions:yearMonthDuration

  ----------------------------------------------------------------

Anne

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