Hi Richard,
Thanks for the iteration. FYI, there were actually a number of minor and some medium level tweaks, as well, to sentences, e.g. for a minor one, don’t call the demo “the OASIS demo,” but rather “This OASIS demo,” unless you never think we’ll have another OASIS demo. :-)
More seriously, please bear with me, as I will have to take a look later today. Could you please confirm (offline if you want) that you based this on my second upload (revision #2) at
https://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/tosca-interop/download.php/50444/OASIS%20TOSCA%20Interop%20Demo%20-%20Abstract%20-%202013-08-26%20PL2.docx ?
If anybody wants Richard and me to take this often line, just let us know, of course.
Thanks,
Paul
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Paul, if we want to put the value proposition first, we can do that. However, I think that this will require a little more editing than simply changing the order of sentences, so I am not comfortable with this revision. In the spirit of rapid iteration, here is a revision to your revision.
Best, --Richard
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